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Friday 15 May 2015

WW1


A week ago Mrs Barry told us in our Writing we have to brainstorm and write what we think about the picture of the WW2. We used some adjectives, nouns and verbs to describe what was happening in the image. Then we had to make a 3 sentence story and use some key words in the sentence and vision yourself in the image and how you might have felt.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Anau it me Saili I like how you have added a picture in world war one that is based on your description.

I really enjoyed reading your work. See you later.

Saili :)

Anonymous said...

Hi Anau it me saane i like the way how you put your thinking tools to help you write all of this by yourself.
Great work CUZ!!

Anonymous said...

I really enjoy reading this Anau.

Anonymous said...

Hi i like the way you write a nice story about the war and when it started

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